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I saw my love again today, in the dark pre dawn sky
the sparkle of her scales seen among the shimmering stars
not dark as night is she, not sun bright blue.
For just a moment I can see her, painted against the sky
beauty that brightens my night darkened heart, eyes that glow as the moon.
I ask her name, call into the black void of night
but she flies in a place I cannot yet be
One day I will find her and together we'll fly
but today I must wait long and watch for her
just a painting of beauty in the pre dawn sky.
©2008-2009 ~Ahgjan
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Every morning's deep blue color reminds me of the love I'm yet to find...

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:iconsawyers2hot:
Sounds like a poem one would begin an epic story with...

Is inspiring me ^_^

Lovely detail, beautiful play on words

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"You are not your fucking khakis"
:iconwildfire66:
Very nice poem and very sweet too
*faves* ^_^
oh and btw soz if i posted this more than once my comp likes to do that o.o

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"Once a dragon becomes your friend that friendship lasts forever..."-- Ironshod
(i recommend visiting her page..some amazing arts there)
:iconahgjan:
thanks!

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Hold tight to your own heart, for love is an art, and like paint from canvas, pure love will not part.

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A good writing from me is a rare thing, but like this one sometimes they just come to be. Thank you for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Hold tight to your own heart, for love is an art, and like paint from canvas, pure love will not part.

Add me on MSN Messenger Ahgjan@Gmail.com
:iconsawyers2hot:
Bien sûr!! It makes me want to write a story. Would you mind so much if I did so, and used your poem as a prologue? If not, that is entirely fine! :D

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♂ + ♂ =♥
♀ + ♀ =♥
♀ + ♂ =♥

"You are not your fucking khakis"
:iconahgjan:
gi right ahead, I'd love that actually!

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Hold tight to your own heart, for love is an art, and like paint from canvas, pure love will not part.

Add me on MSN Messenger Ahgjan@Gmail.com
:iconsawyers2hot:
Thank you! I will send it to you if I start on it, if you'd like that! :heart:

--
♂ + ♂ =♥
♀ + ♀ =♥
♀ + ♂ =♥

"You are not your fucking khakis"
:iconahgjan:
I'd love that

--
Hold tight to your own heart, for love is an art, and like paint from canvas, pure love will not part.

Add me on MSN Messenger Ahgjan@Gmail.com
:iconwildfire66:
Np ^__^

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"Wildfire66 Friend Of Dragons"

"Once a dragon becomes your friend that friendship lasts forever..."-- Ironshod
(i recommend visiting her page..some amazing arts there)

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